Hello everybody.
As Nele requested it, I'm sending you my sketch for the next pannel of the 5th page. I think we should do it too, to really show the work in progress..
It has been a bit complex for me lately... As I decided to change a bit the story board I post, I needed to re think a bit the composition of my pages. Then I've noticed that my 4th page and 5th page started both by a kind of big panel.. which is not so nice. After many many tries... I've finally chosen to make another big panel. Actually I had to put different actions in the same page... So I was thinking to use little panels. One for each action... then I would have had 2 pages, face to face, looking the same. BUT the problem is that when you start with big ones, the eyes go there first... and so my little ones would get lost, and a problem of reading order would have appear... Anyway... there are millions of way to change it.. and I decided to take the big one, because, mainly, I like to draw BIG panels! :)
I put LeO somewhere also to really know where he is at that moment...
Now... I only have to ink it. (I guess you have noted the funny "only" in the last sentence).
Ciao...