So here is how the first page should look like before the inking.
Faezal did a great work in designing the "air-navette"... thanks a lot! I love all of them and this one is my favorite!
On the second page, you can notice some characters whom are already known! :)
there he is...
a pretty airship Faezal. It´s nice to see you working together.
Great start, PieR and - and the fashion-week-Dobermann looks like a real ashole. Do they talk to each other...or just meet in this one panel?
How many pages are you doing? !0? 12?