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October.17.2009
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Hello,
So just before few days off the project, I really wanted to make this page done... That was a long day, but here it is.
Ant comments are welcome!
As always, I'll rechange few details here and there... Like writing on the bag "keep me" or something like that.. a bit like Alice in wonderland...
Good night now... pfff...
:)

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pier gajewski wrote 2 years 14 weeks ago

Back to you...

Thanks for your comments!
I think that "Don't let them know" is a good ideas... or something like that!
The white silhouette is a very good idea actually. At the begining, the graffiti wall was in black, and I changed it to white because my LeO was black too... stupid me! Thanks!
I think that the main problem, is that it's not that easy to understand that it's a wall actually.
I should make the floor appearing somehow... but then LeO would be too small... I still need to think about it!
Thanks guys!

nele wrote 2 years 14 weeks ago

More Graffiti - less LeO

Hey PieR, looking at your page number 8 this morning I thought: You could draw LeO as a white (=> empty) silhouette/outline in front of a quite dark graffiti. Maybe on a dirty wall.
Do you know allready what will be written on the wall?

faezal wrote 2 years 15 weeks ago

graffiti

I don't see any complication in reading the panels at first glance, and I kinda like the graffiti (especially the 'elephant' drawing. I already imagine the drawing to be printed on T-shirt). But I'm sure you see it differently in your head. Leave it for a while, and come back to it later and maybe you'll know what to add in the panel.

pier gajewski wrote 2 years 15 weeks ago

graffiti

Yep...
I don't really like that panel actually...
If any of you have ideas...

nele wrote 2 years 15 weeks ago

Maybe you can write "don´t

Maybe you can write "don´t let them know" or "don´t tell them" on the box?

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